四 、阅读下面材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。
4、 Read the following materials and write an article of no less than 800 words according to the requirements.
“长征部队经过艰难跋涉胜利会师”“抗战胜利时军民欢呼‘中华民族解放万岁!’”“开国大典上五星红旗冉冉升起”……这些历史性的瞬间,不仅记录着时代的跨越,更沉淀为民族精神的坐标。我们也常常重温这些瞬间,从中汲取奋进的力量。
The Long March troops successfully met after a difficult journey, the military and civilians cheered 'Long live the liberation of the Chinese nation!' during the victory of the War of Resistance Against Japan, and the five-star red flag rose slowly at the founding ceremony... These historic moments not only record the leap of the times, but also serve as symbols of the national spirit. We often revisit these moments and draw strength from them to forge ahead.
如果有一天,我们向未来的青年讲述这些瞬间……
If one day we tell these moments to future youth
以上材料引发了你怎样的联想和思考?请写一篇文章。
What associations and thoughts did the above materials evoke in you? Please write an article.
要求:选准角度,确定立意,明确文体,自拟标题;不要套作,不得抄袭;不得泄露个人信息;不少于800字。
Requirements: Choose the right angle, determine the intention, clarify the style, and draft the title on your own; Do not copy or plagiarize; Do not disclose personal information; Not less than 800 words.
【范文参考】:
[Sample reference]:
【材料解读】
[Interpretation of Materials]
核心元素:“历史性的瞬间”。材料列举了三个具有划时代意义的瞬间:长征会师(革命精神的象征)、抗战胜利(民族独立的标志)、开国大典(新中国成立的起点)。这些瞬间的共同点是:艰难奋斗后的胜利、具有里程碑意义、凝聚民族精神。
Core element: 'Historic moments'. The material lists three epoch-making moments: the meeting of the Long March (a symbol of revolutionary spirit), the victory of the Anti Japanese War (a symbol of national independence), and the founding ceremony (the starting point of the founding of New China). The commonality of these moments is victory after difficult struggles, milestone significance, and the cohesion of national spirit.
内在价值:材料指出这些瞬间不仅“记录时代的跨越”,更“沉淀为民族精神的坐标”。这意味着,这些瞬间的价值超越了历史事实本身,升华为激励后人的精神力量(如坚韧不拔、百折不挠、团结一心、爱国主义等)。
Intrinsic value: The material points out that these moments not only "record the leap of the times", but also "precipitate as coordinates of the national spirit". This means that the value of these moments transcends the historical facts themselves and is elevated to a spiritual force that inspires future generations (such as perseverance, resilience, unity, patriotism, etc.).
现实关联:“我们常常重温这些瞬间,从中汲取奋进的力量。” 这句话将历史与当下连接,指明了重温历史的意义在于为当代人提供精神动力。
Realistic relevance: "We often revisit these moments and draw strength from them." This sentence connects history with the present, indicating that the significance of revisiting history lies in providing spiritual motivation for contemporary people.
写作情境与任务:“如果有一天,我们向未来的青年讲述这些瞬间……” 这是本题最关键的部分,它设定了一个特定的、面向未来的叙述视角和对话语境。写作者的身份是“历史传承者”,对象是“未来的青年”,目的是“讲述”并由此引发“联想和思考”。
Writing context and task: "If one day, we tell these moments to future youth..." This is the most crucial part of this question, which sets a specific, future oriented narrative perspective and dialogue context. The identity of the author is a 'historical inheritor', targeting 'future youth', with the aim of 'telling' and triggering 'associations and reflections'.
【立意参考】
[Intentional reference]
①让历史成为未来的精神灯塔。通过有温度的叙事,让历史中的信仰之光、奋斗之志与未来青年的心灵同频共振,使民族精神血脉在新的时代语境下生生不息。
① Let history become a spiritual beacon for the future. By narrating with warmth, the light of faith and the determination to strive in history resonate with the hearts of future youth, allowing the national spirit to flourish in the new era context.
②传承民族精神的“火种”:重点论述我们向未来青年讲述的,不仅是历史事实,更是背后的精神。阐述这些精神坐标(如长征精神、抗战精神)在新时代、乃至未来时代何以依然是不朽的财富,如何指引未来青年面对他们的挑战。
② The 'spark' of inheriting national spirit: The focus is on discussing what we are telling to future youth, not only historical facts, but also the spirit behind them. Elaborate on why these spiritual coordinates (such as the Long March spirit and the Anti Japanese War spirit) remain immortal treasures in the new era and even in the future, and how they guide future youth to face their challenges.
③“瞬间”与“永恒”的辩证:探讨为何这些特定的“瞬间”能承载“永恒”的精神。分析瞬间的辉煌源于长期的积淀与奋斗,从而启示未来青年要重视过程的积累,也要敢于创造属于自己的历史性瞬间。
③ The Dialectics of "Moment" and "Eternity": Exploring Why These Specific "Moments" Can Carry the Spirit of "Eternity". Analyzing the brilliance of an instant stems from long-term accumulation and struggle, thus inspiring future youth to value the accumulation of the process and dare to create their own historic moments.
④以史为鉴,照亮未来:将历史瞬间作为理解现在、展望未来的镜子。讲述这些故事,是为了让未来青年理解民族来路的艰辛,珍惜当下的和平与发展,并肩负起他们这一代人的使命,防止历史悲剧重演或继承光荣传统。
④ Taking history as a mirror to illuminate the future: using historical moments as a reflection to understand the present and look forward to the future. Telling these stories is to help future youth understand the hardships of the nation's journey, cherish current peace and development, shoulder the mission of their generation, prevent the recurrence of historical tragedies, or inherit glorious traditions.
⑤对话与共鸣:文章应体现出与“未来青年”的真谛对话感,思考他们的可能困惑(如对历史的疏离、物质丰富下的精神迷茫等),并针对性地用这些历史瞬间去回应、启迪他们,实现精神的跨代际共鸣。
⑤ Dialogue and Resonance: The article should reflect a sense of dialogue with the true essence of "future youth", reflect on their possible confusion (such as alienation from history, spiritual confusion under material abundance, etc.), and use these historical moments to respond and inspire them in a targeted manner, achieving intergenerational spiritual resonance.